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Dan12905
I love making animations, but video games distract me alot

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I haven't been working on my animating...

Posted by Dan12905 - May 18th, 2012


sorry, but there's a lot of shiz going on right now, but I have vowed that after my birthday on August 17, and I turn 16. I shall spend at least 3 hours a day working on my animating skills, and making some animations as well. But hey, I had a dream the other day,and i kinda want to make it a story, all of the dream I could remember is here:

It's a clear night with few clouds in the sky, a man sits on a hill concealed of vision by trees. Knelt down on one knee, he looks at the full moon and how it illuminates the large empty lot a few yards from the hill. from the right of the lot, a black sedan pulls in. It stops in about the middle of the lot. Four men exit the car, one from each door, all dressed in black. Two men head to the trunk, and the other two stand guard. The man on the hill reaches for a breifcase beside him, and pulls out a SCAR SSR. A rifle equipped for being a sniper. As he lays down readying his weapon, the two men at the trunk pull out another man. His hands are tied and his mouth gagged, but his legs were free so he could stand, and walk on his own.as all the men start slowly walking a few feet to the right of the car. A white limo pulls in from the same entrance as the sadan. It parks across from the it, five of the six doors open. 5 men step out of the car, all dressed in white. The driver goes to the unopened door and opens it. A middle aged man, with grey hair, a white suit and tie, and a cane with a white handle attached to a black shaft by a golden ring. The men escort the man to the men dressed in black. The sniper begins to aim his rifle at the well dressed man, he has it directly to his head. The men in black have a breif conversation with the man, then one of the men in white hands a breifcase to one of the ones in black. The sniper begins to slowly pull down on the trigger, but hesitates, and then stops when he sees another man walk into the lot.

The man walks right up to the group of men. but one of the men in white cuts hime off about half way to the group. The sniper chuckles as he sees the man in white put a pistol to the mans head. Suddenly the man grabs the barrel of the gun with his right hand, and pulls it into the air, as he punches the other man in the stomach. The man in white lets go of the gun, and tumbles back, falling to the ground. The man spins the gun around so he hold it correctly, and shoot the other man in the head. Quickly all the men draw their side arms, and aim at the man. He proceeds to put his hand up, and drops the gun to the grounds. Two men in white walk closer to the man, he starts slowly putting his hands behind his head. The sniper sees a remote in the mans sleeve, and watches as the man presses a button on it. Suddenly the sedan blows of from the snipers left side, causing it to flip into the air spiralling toward the group of men. As the two men in white glance at the explosion, the unknown man runs at them. He jumps up, and his left foot pushes the man's chest slightly back as his right foot swing around, hitting him in the side of the head. His right foot then lands on the other mans right shoulder and the man spins counter clock wise, kicking the man in the back of the head with his left foot. Two men in black and one in white get killed by the sedan fallng on them, as the rest take cover at the limo. the tied man has taken taken cover behind the wreckage of the sedan. When all the men ready to fire at the unknown man, he presses another button on the remote. The limo blows up with three explosions, one at a time starting from the trunk, and ending with the hood.

All the smoke makes it impossible for the sniper to see whats happening. The sniper quickly stands up with his weapon detaching the eqiupment that makes it work like a sniper, and runs down the hill. When he makes it to the seen, the man tied, and the well dressed man are gone, and there are no survivors.

I haven't been working on my animating...


Comments

The story sounds awesome!
Good luck on making it come to life! :D

thanks <:D

Extencive content for a small scene. You got some writing skills. Don't forget to explains some of the "why"s of the story, like: why is there a sniper looking over? What's up with the tied up man? Why did some guy just took out the whole unit? And why were they in the lot in he first place?
Something to think about bro ;)

That's the point though, the mystery, the story would keep going, but it's not done yet, it's like Chapter 1 of a book

that dream sounds like it was nice

FUCK YEAH, stupid school had to wake me up, although apparently you only remember the last dream you have before you wake up, so its good thing i guess