Extencive content for a small scene. You got some writing skills. Don't forget to explains some of the "why"s of the story, like: why is there a sniper looking over? What's up with the tied up man? Why did some guy just took out the whole unit? And why were they in the lot in he first place?
Something to think about bro ;)
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That's the point though, the mystery, the story would keep going, but it's not done yet, it's like Chapter 1 of a book
that dream sounds like it was nice
FUCK YEAH, stupid school had to wake me up, although apparently you only remember the last dream you have before you wake up, so its good thing i guess
JKSSN
The story sounds awesome!
Good luck on making it come to life! :D
Dan12905
thanks <:D